When people are short of words, they become poets... that is just how I think, no need to be serious. But I am, and here are few lines I penned down..
For a day let me be a child
that I can live in the present always..
For a day let me be the tranquil breeze
that I can gift a gentle smile my own way..
For a day let me be the sky so vast
that I can fulfill what all you pray..
For a day let me be the sea shore
that I be the witness to creation's best each day..
For a day let me be the God's wish
that I be one with whatever you say..
For a day let me be the gleaming moonlight
that my radiance can flourish away..
For a day let me be the ocean wave
that I don't resist to find my own way..
For a day let me celebrate life
that I become one with my SELF..
I already had its review done from Ashu - The Cruel Critic! So now, only praises are welcomed and be4 doing so, please remember...its my FIRST poem ever. OK?
Loads of love,
Bhanu
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aww if it's the 1st poem then it's a WOW creation :P
gud luck ..and try being regular on the blogville :D
Hi Bhanu -
Amazing.. You are blessed Bhanu. Spread the joy around and let the world be happy and Joyful...
Such wonderful things come only from inner silence. May that inner silence bring out more beauties to this world...
Love and JaiGurudev...
well,well...i was a witness to this beautiful piece of writing...lovely poem by a lovely girl :)
Jai Gurudev
@peter: even I'm wow, no?
@Seeker: Exploring the inner silence has been amazing. Thanku Sir, Love
@Shaloo: The Sattwa around was d inspiration actually!
i regret being near n not with u..
Aman
Wow, too good Madam. Keep writing, really you have got the freshness in your posts...
Nice poem.. surprised to see that u r poet too.. :D But it's a pleasant one..:)
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